I think I mentioned it earlier, but I am part of a painting group who bring their recent work to the be critiqued by the group. I am quite overwhelmed by the talent of the people around me, but am so pleased with their kindness as they contribute direction and sound advise.
"Quiet time on the South Alouette" 16x20
The advise from the group was ...
- Make the Star the Star (Emphasize the middle section)
- Check your lines (make the lines on the back mountains consistent)
- Light changes things (add back lit foliage where sky holes are / add highlights to the front grass)
- Brushstrokes need to reflect the direction of your object (water reflections need to be completely horizontal)
Here is the same picture with the changes added (and a different frame)
The highlights and foliage seemed to add depth to the picture.
These were great lessons, on seeing those things that help the picture get to the finish stage.... Thanks to the power of the group.
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